{"id":1380,"date":"2010-03-19T16:00:27","date_gmt":"2010-03-19T21:00:27","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/lanternreview.com\/blog\/?p=1380"},"modified":"2010-03-19T21:19:48","modified_gmt":"2010-03-20T02:19:48","slug":"weekly-prompt-poems-that-play-with-shape","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.lanternreview.com\/blog\/2010\/03\/19\/weekly-prompt-poems-that-play-with-shape\/","title":{"rendered":"Weekly Prompt: Poems that Play with Shape"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>During the past week or so, we&#8217;ve been looking at poems and aspects of presenting poems on the page which take into account (2-D) visual space and make room for illustration and elements of painting, drawing, collage, etc.\u00a0 This Friday, our prompt asks you to reexamine a form which many of us may remember being introduced to in grade school: the concrete poem.<\/p>\n<figure id=\"attachment_1390\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-1390\" style=\"width: 396px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><a href=\"http:\/\/lanternreview.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2010\/03\/ApollinaireCalligrams.jpg\"><img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" class=\"size-full wp-image-1390\" title=\"ApollinaireCalligrams\" src=\"http:\/\/lanternreview.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2010\/03\/ApollinaireCalligrams.jpg\" alt=\"Examples of Calligrams by Guillaume Apollinaire\" width=\"396\" height=\"375\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.lanternreview.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2010\/03\/ApollinaireCalligrams.jpg 396w, https:\/\/www.lanternreview.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2010\/03\/ApollinaireCalligrams-300x284.jpg 300w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 396px) 100vw, 396px\" \/><\/a><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-1390\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Examples of Calligrams by Guillaume Apollinaire<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<p>&#8220;<a href=\"http:\/\/www.poetryfoundation.org\/learning\/glossary-term.html?term=Concrete%20poetry\">Concrete poetry<\/a>,&#8221; according the Poetry Foundation&#8217;s glossary, is &#8220;Verse that emphasizes nonlinguistic elements in  its meaning, such as a typeface that creates a visual image of the  topic.&#8221;\u00a0 Far from being limited to poems whose words take on the outline of the object they are describing, concrete poetry can encompass everything from a playing with the sizes and spacing of text on the page to certain kinds of full-on &#8220;visual poetry,&#8221; which are more akin to collage or painting in their methods of arrangement words. The challenge, of course, is how to integrate the visual into a poem in a way that is satisfyingly beautiful (or jarring, depending on the desired effect) and yet feels organic and further enhances the complexity of the reader&#8217;s interaction with it.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Prompt: Write a\u00a0 poem takes into account shape and visual space on the flat plane of the page.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Some suggestions:<\/p>\n<p>1) Compose a calligram, or poem in which the shape of the words enacts or take on the visual form of some object as a kind of complex illustration.\u00a0 (See examples of Guillaume Apollinare&#8217;s famous calligrams at the top of this post).<\/p>\n<p>2) Create a poem that experiments with unusual typographical arrangements to emphasize its meaning.\u00a0\u00a0 The Poetry Foundation also has a couple of neat visual poems that play with the shapes of letters: <a href=\"http:\/\/www.poetryfoundation.org\/archive\/poem.html?id=182400\">here<\/a>, and <a href=\"http:\/\/www.poetryfoundation.org\/archive\/poem.html?id=182407\">here<\/a>.<\/p>\n<p>3) Write a poem on a piece of paper (or other flat surface) that is not a standard vertical letter-sized or notebook-sized sheet, using the shape of the surface to guide your form.\u00a0 For example, a long piece of ribbon, or the back of a circular coaster.\u00a0 I&#8217;ve found that this exercise (which I&#8217;ve borrowed from a former teacher of mine, Bruce Snider) becomes especially interesting if one uses a writing surface that already has words on it and allows those words to seamlessly flow into the resulting poem.\u00a0 (Examples of poets who&#8217;ve used a similar technique include A.R. Ammons, who wrote &#8220;Sphere&#8221; on ticker tape, and D.A. Powell, who wrote one of his books with his notebook turned sideways).<\/p>\n<p>4) Write a poem that engages with the use of negative space in an existing piece of text or image (for example, a poem written in the margins of a newspaper, between the lines of a letter, or in the background spaces of a photograph or advertisement).<\/p>\n<p>We realize that this week&#8217;s prompt is a little different, in that your response may or may not be easy to share in comment form.\u00a0 In light of this, we&#8217;ve created a <a href=\"http:\/\/www.flickr.com\/groups\/1383445@N23\/pool\/\">Flickr pool <\/a>where you can upload photos of your responses to our prompts if you&#8217;d like to share them [if you don&#8217;t feel comfortable uploading photos of whole poems, feel free to crop creatively or blur out portions of the text].\u00a0 Here&#8217;s how to do it:<\/p>\n<p>1) Follow <a href=\"http:\/\/www.flickr.com\/groups\/1383445@N23\/pool\/\">this link<\/a> to get to our pool.<\/p>\n<p>2) Click &#8220;Join this Group.&#8221; (Sign into Yahoo\/Flickr if you need to do so, or create an account).<\/p>\n<p>3) Confirm that you want to &#8220;Join this Group.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>4) Upload the image or video you want to your stream.\u00a0 In the description, mention the prompt you&#8217;re responding to (if you like you can include the text, too, but that&#8217;s not necessary). We suggest that you tag your poem for ease of navigation as the pool  grows (for example, I&#8217;ve tagged the concrete poem I uploaded with  &#8220;concrete poem&#8221;), but that&#8217;s also optional.<\/p>\n<p>5) Choose &#8220;Groups &gt;&gt; Your Groups&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>6) Select the group &#8220;Lantern Review &#8212; Weekly Prompt Responses&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>7) Click &#8220;Add something.&#8221;\u00a0 Follow the instructions to add your photo to the pool.\u00a0 That&#8217;s it!<\/p>\n<p>We hope that you&#8217;ll share some of what you&#8217;ve written with us; we&#8217;d love to see how your experiments turn out.\u00a0 If we get enough responses, we may even feature some of them on the blog in upcoming weeks.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>During the past week or so, we&#8217;ve been looking at poems and aspects of presenting poems on the page which take into account (2-D) visual space and make room for illustration and elements of painting, drawing, collage, etc.\u00a0 This Friday, our prompt asks you to reexamine a form which many of us may remember being [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_monsterinsights_skip_tracking":false,"_monsterinsights_sitenote_active":false,"_monsterinsights_sitenote_note":"","_monsterinsights_sitenote_category":0},"categories":[13,238],"tags":[254,270,72,271,272,71],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.lanternreview.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1380"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.lanternreview.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.lanternreview.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.lanternreview.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.lanternreview.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=1380"}],"version-history":[{"count":11,"href":"https:\/\/www.lanternreview.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1380\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1396,"href":"https:\/\/www.lanternreview.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1380\/revisions\/1396"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.lanternreview.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=1380"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.lanternreview.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=1380"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.lanternreview.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=1380"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}